Ghosts, Reverses and Monks (Finished)

[Apollo Shiyoke]

Sub Note- I looked at Ghost Guardna when making this deck and thought of what a ghost would do. A ghost would be really weak until it is destroyed, it would be a transmission from a human to the ghost spirit. Also, ghosts cant attack but they can haunt. Some ghosts are union monsters that attach to the enemies monsters for very wild and random effects. Some Ghosts also have effects on the field concerning 0 attack. They take full advantage of it!

Name: Ghost Commander
Level: 3
Attribute/Type: Dark/Warrior/Tuner
Attack: 0
Defense: 1200
Effect: Activate only while ghost commander is in the graveyard. Target a monster with 0 attack. Remove Ghost Commander from the game. That monster gains 2000 attack. That monster's attack can not be changed again while it is on the field.

Name: Ghost Wurm
Level: 6
Attribute/Type: Dark/Insect/Synchro
Attack: 0
Defense: 2200
Effect: Once per turn, you can change the attack and defense of one face up monster on the field. All monsters your opponent controls with 0 defense are destroyed as long as this card is face up on the field.

Name: Ghost Infantry
Level: 2
Attribute/Type: Dark/Warrior/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 0
Effect: You can sacrafice Ghost Infantry to special summon one monster with 0 attack in your hand. Increase that monsters attack by 2000. Destroy that monster on the end phase.

Name: Ghost Berserker
Level: 4
Attribute/Type: Dark/Beast/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 2000
Effect: When this card attacks, you can swap its attack and defense until the end of the turn. If you do, destroy this monster at the end of the turn. While this card is in the graveyard, you can sacrifice a Dark monster to bring it back to the top of your deck.

Name: Ghost Archfiend
Level: 5
Attribute/Type: Dark/Fiend/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 1000
Effect: You can pay 1000 lifepoints to permanently increase this cards attack by 1000. You can use this ability only twice per turn.

Name: Ghost Lily
Level: 3
Attribute/Type: Dark/Fairy/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 1500
Effect: Flip: If an opponent attacks this monster while it is faced down, negate that attack. When this monster is face up in the graveyard, you can remove it from play to gain 800 lifepoints.

Name: Ghost Dragoon
Level: 9
Attribute/Type: Dark/Dragon/Synchro
Attack: 0
Defense: 3000
Effect: When this card is synchro summoned, swap its attack and defense. When this card is sent to the graveyard, your opponent takes damage equal to the defense of this card when it was destroyed.

Name: Ghost Channeler
Level: 2
Attribute/Type: Dark/Spellcaster/Union
Attack: 0
Defense: 200
Effect: Equip to a ghost monster. Swap the attack and defense of a monster this card is equipped to. When the equipped monster would be destroyed, you can destroy this monster instead. (Standard Union rules)

Name: Abandoned Cemetery
Type: Field Spell
Effect: Monsters with 0 attack gain 1000 attack. When Abandoned Cemetary is destroyed, you can activate one "Reborn Cemetary" card from your hand, deck or graveyard.

Name: Reborn Cemetery
Type: Field Spell
Effect: Activate only with the effect of Abandoned Cemetary. Target a creature, then sacrifice Reborn Cemetary, destroy all monsters on the field with more then 500 attack. Target creature gains 300 attack for each card destroyed this way.


My next set will feature reverse monsters. Reverse monsters can really change the way a game is played, for their abilities force them on the opponent's field. They also hurt your opponent just for controlling them!

Name: Reverse Swordsman
Level: 9
Attribute/Type: Light/Warrior
Attack: 2000
Defense: 3000
Effect: This monster can not attack. This monster can not be special summoned to your opponent's side of the field except by sacrificing a reverse monster on your opponent's side of the field. Once per turn, the opponent of the controller of this card can draw one additional card. If this is the only card on your side of the field, destroy it and inflict 1000 damage to its controller.

Name: Reverse Speed Warrior
Level: 6
Attribute/Type: Wind/Warrior/Fusion/Effect
Attack: 900
Defense: 400
Fusion Material Monsters: Speed Warrior + 2 "Reverse" Monsters
Effect: This monster can not attack. When this monster is summoned, destroy all monsters on your opponent's field and move this card to your opponent's side of the field. Then, summon 4 "Speed" tokens (wind/warrior 0/0). These tokens can not be used for a tribute summon.

Name: Reverse Pumpking
Level: 4
Attribute/Type: Dark/Zombie/Effect
Attack: 1800
Defence: 2000
Effect: This monster can not attack. When this card is summoned, move it to your opponent's side of the field. While this card is face up, its cnotroller can not summon a monster.

Name: Reverse Pumpking
Level: 4
Attribute/Type: Dark/Zombie/Effect
Attack: 1800
Defense: 2000
Effect: This monster can not attack. During each player's standby phases, decrease the attack of all "Reverse" monsters by 200 points.

Monks- The monk series of monsters is featured in Apollo's reverse deck. Many monks rely on your opponent having the reverse creatures for their ability to activate. Also, Rusha the Darksworn Monk takes a look at a possible next series to be made.

Name: Gura, Anti-Reverse Monk
Level: 4
Attribute/Type: Earth/Warrior
Attack: 1500
Defence: 1200
Effect: While your opponent only controls "Reverse" monsters, this monster can attack directly.

Name: Kira the Fox Monk
Level: 4
Attribute/Type: Earth/Warrior
Attack: 1700
Defence: 1200
Effect: This card gains 100 attack for every monster on your opponent's side of the field.

Name: Enlightenment
Type: Spell/Continuous
Effect: Whenever a monster is placed on your opponent's side of the field that didn't come from his/her's hand, your opponent takes 300 damage. When Enlightenment is destroyed, you take 900 damage. When your opponent orders an attack, you can remove Enlightenment from play to gain 900 lifepoints.

Name: Rusha the Darksworn Monk
Level: 7
Attribute/Type: Dark/Warrior/Effect
Attack: 3100
Defence: 2000
Effect: When this monster orders an attack, you must send 2 cards from the graveyard to the bottom of the deck. If you can't, negate this attack. You can pay 1000 lifepoints to send the bottom 7 cards from your deck to the graveyard.

Name: Rusha the Reverse Seeker
Level: 9
Attribute/Type: Dark/Warrior/Effect
Attack: 3100
Defense: 2000
Effect: If this monster attacks another monster, it must be a Reverse monster. If this monster attacks a face-down monster and it is not a reverse monster, destroy this monster at the end of the damage step. This monster does not count as a "Reverse" monster.

[Neos Rivetter]

The only two I don't approve of myself is "Reverse Pumpking" and "Rusha the Darksworn Monk". Everything else is good to go.

My reasoning:
"Reverse Pumpking": One card stops the opponent from summoning PERIOD with no effort from you. If you draw this first turn and you play this, you've just got yourself a cheap path to victory. Normally, if it only takes one card to devastate your opponent's options, the card can be deemed too powerful. If it was a 6-Star (like the original Pumpking, King of Ghosts) and you had to Tribute Summon to bring it out, then it would be a bit more fair. Considering its ability, 7-stars or higher would actually make it less broken. This is coming from someone that likes to take total control of a duel, so this should say something. :/

"Rusha the Darksworn Monk": I don't wanna see this guy or other similar monsters with the Lightsworns! Lightsworns send cards from deck to grave, these apparent "Darksworn" monsters send cards from grave to bottom of deck, which can potentially take out the deckout weakness of the Lightsworn decks. Believe me when I say that decks powerful enough as is!

Okay, now they're all good to go. Good luck when the dueling starts! I'm still waiting for when I can get into the RP... >_>

[Apollo Shiyoke]

Well I posted a topic at your house if you want to rp with meh

[Jack Atlas]

Name: Ghost Commander
Level: 3
Attribute/Type: Dark/Warrior/Tuner
Attack: 0
Defense: 1200
Effect: Activate only while ghost commander is in the graveyard. Remove Ghost Commander from the game. Target monster with 0 attack gains 2000 attack. That monster's attack can not be changed again while it is on the field.

You know... this effect is resurrected useless right? You never selected a monster to target, so how is there going to be any atk point change?

Name: Ghost Infantry
Level: 2
Attribute/Type: Dark/Warrior/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 0
Effect: You can sacrafice Ghost Infantry to special summon one monster with 0 attack in your hand. Increase that monsters attack by 2000. Destroy that monster on the end phase.

Yeah... you spelled 'sacrifice' wrong.

Name: Ghost Archfiend
Level: 5
Attribute/Type: Dark/Fiend/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 1000
Effect: You can pay 1000 lifepoints to permanently increase this cards attack by 1000. You can use this ability only twice per turn.

I'd like an effect change:
"You can pay any amount of life points to permanently increase this monster's attack points by the same amount."
Then limit this card to 1 per deck. (This is only a suggestion, if you don't want it, then don't take it)

Name: Ghost Lily
Level: 3
Attribute/Type: Dark/Fairy/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 1500
Effect: When this face down card is attacked and flipped face up, negate the attack. While this card is in the graveyard, you can put it at the bottom of your deck. If you do, you gain 1000 lifepoints.

Yeah... this effect is pretty confusing.
"Flip: If an opponent's monster is attack, negate the attack. While this card is in the graveyard, you can place it at the bottom of your deck"
The gain 1000 life points is just plain out broken. Add a few morphing jars to it, you can get 3000 life points in a few turns even if it's limited to 1. So I don't think the gain 1000 life points should be there.

Name: Abandoned Cemetery
Type: Field Spell
Effect: Monsters with 0 attack gain 1000 attack. When Abandoned Cemetary is destroyed, you can activate one "Reborn Cemetary" card from your hand, deck or graveyard.

Yeah... it's not bad, but take away the graveyard. It's pretty messed up otherwise.

Name: Reborn Cemetery
Type: Field Spell
Effect: Activate only with the effect of Abandoned Cemetary. Sacrifice Reborn Cemetary, destroy all monsters on the field with more then 500 attack. Target creature gains 300 attack for each card destroyed this way.


"Target creature" You didn't even select a monster so how are you going to 'target' it?


Name: Kira the Fox Monk
Level: 4
Attribute/Type: Earth/Warrior
Attack: 1800
Defence: 1200
Effect: This card gains 100 attack for every monster on your opponent's side of the field.

Lower it's attack points, for your opponent to attack this monster it's already a simple 1900.

Name: Enlightenment
Type: Spell/Continuous
Effect: Whenever a monster is placed on your opponent's side of the field that didn't come from his/her's hand, your opponent takes 300 damage. When Enlightenment is destroyed, you gan 1500 lifepoints. When your opponent orders an attack, you can destroy Enlightenment.

You I was fine with the effect until "When Enlightenment is destroyed, you gain 1500 life points." 1500? You have any idea how much I can do with that? 1500 is way to much, rather you shouldn't be gaining anything at all for it being destroyed.

[Apollo Shiyoke]

Jul 4, 2009 0:22:41 GMT -5 Jack Atlas said:

Name: Ghost Commander
Level: 3
Attribute/Type: Dark/Warrior/Tuner
Attack: 0
Defense: 1200
Effect: Activate only while ghost commander is in the graveyard. Remove Ghost Commander from the game. Target monster with 0 attack gains 2000 attack. That monster's attack can not be changed again while it is on the field.

You know... this effect is resurrected useless right? You never selected a monster to target, so how is there going to be any atk point change?

Target monster pretty much explains that you're going to target a monster.

Name: Ghost Infantry
Level: 2
Attribute/Type: Dark/Warrior/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 0
Effect: You can sacrafice Ghost Infantry to special summon one monster with 0 attack in your hand. Increase that monsters attack by 2000. Destroy that monster on the end phase.

Yeah... you spelled 'sacrifice' wrong.

Yeah that definately changes the way the card is played

Name: Ghost Archfiend
Level: 5
Attribute/Type: Dark/Fiend/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 1000
Effect: You can pay 1000 lifepoints to permanently increase this cards attack by 1000. You can use this ability only twice per turn.

I'd like an effect change:
"You can pay any amount of life points to permanently increase this monster's attack points by the same amount."
Then limit this card to 1 per deck. (This is only a suggestion, if you don't want it, then don't take it)

...Wouldn't that make it the winged dragon of Ra?

Name: Ghost Lily
Level: 3
Attribute/Type: Dark/Fairy/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 1500
Effect: When this face down card is attacked and flipped face up, negate the attack. While this card is in the graveyard, you can put it at the bottom of your deck. If you do, you gain 1000 lifepoints.

Yeah... this effect is pretty confusing.
"Flip: If an opponent's monster is attack, negate the attack. While this card is in the graveyard, you can place it at the bottom of your deck"
The gain 1000 life points is just plain out broken. Add a few morphing jars to it, you can get 3000 life points in a few turns even if it's limited to 1. So I don't think the gain 1000 life points should be there.

Yeah that one's right. Maybe I should have it get removed from play and change the gain to 800 instead.

Name: Abandoned Cemetery
Type: Field Spell
Effect: Monsters with 0 attack gain 1000 attack. When Abandoned Cemetary is destroyed, you can activate one "Reborn Cemetary" card from your hand, deck or graveyard.

Yeah... it's not bad, but take away the graveyard. It's pretty messed up otherwise.

Name: Reborn Cemetery
Type: Field Spell
Effect: Activate only with the effect of Abandoned Cemetary. Sacrifice Reborn Cemetary, destroy all monsters on the field with more then 500 attack. Target creature gains 300 attack for each card destroyed this way.


"Target creature" You didn't even select a monster so how are you going to 'target' it?

Target monster, once again, targets a monster

Name: Kira the Fox Monk
Level: 4
Attribute/Type: Earth/Warrior
Attack: 1800
Defence: 1200
Effect: This card gains 100 attack for every monster on your opponent's side of the field.

Lower it's attack points, for your opponent to attack this monster it's already a simple 1900.
Yeah but worst case scenario its a 2300 and that's IF your opponent has a full field. If I lowered it to 1600 then the best case scenario is that its 2100 attack, 100 attack greater then that gene warped wearwolf and only if the field is full.

Name: Enlightenment
Type: Spell/Continuous
Effect: Whenever a monster is placed on your opponent's side of the field that didn't come from his/her's hand, your opponent takes 300 damage. When Enlightenment is destroyed, you gan 1500 lifepoints. When your opponent orders an attack, you can destroy Enlightenment.

You I was fine with the effect until "When Enlightenment is destroyed, you gain 1500 life points." 1500? You have any idea how much I can do with that? 1500 is way to much, rather you shouldn't be gaining anything at all for it being destroyed.

I mainly made the destroy thing for its second ability. I could change it to "If Enlightenment is destroyed, you lose 400 life points. If it is destroyed by its own ability, you gain 1000 life points instead. Besides, they have way better healers then that. one, for example, would be guardian angle joan. with the new effect, though, its pretty much a dian keto. After all, the opponent isnt going to be getting that much on the field that isnt in their hand.

[Jack Atlas]

Name: Ghost Commander
Level: 3
Attribute/Type: Dark/Warrior/Tuner
Attack: 0
Defense: 1200
Effect: Activate only while ghost commander is in the graveyard. Remove Ghost Commander from the game. Target monster with 0 attack gains 2000 attack. That monster's attack can not be changed again while it is on the field.

You know... this effect is resurrected useless right? You never selected a monster to target, so how is there going to be any atk point change?

Target monster pretty much explains that you're going to target a monster.

>> No it doesn't. If you don't select a monster beforehand, the effect is resurrected useless. I advise you to correct the effect otherwise, when time come, rulings will overrule it for there is no selected monster.

Name: Ghost Infantry
Level: 2
Attribute/Type: Dark/Warrior/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 0
Effect: You can sacrafice Ghost Infantry to special summon one monster with 0 attack in your hand. Increase that monsters attack by 2000. Destroy that monster on the end phase.

Yeah... you spelled 'sacrifice' wrong.

Yeah that definately changes the way the card is played

>>Well I was just pointing it out xD

Name: Ghost Archfiend
Level: 5
Attribute/Type: Dark/Fiend/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 1000
Effect: You can pay 1000 lifepoints to permanently increase this cards attack by 1000. You can use this ability only twice per turn.

I'd like an effect change:
"You can pay any amount of life points to permanently increase this monster's attack points by the same amount."
Then limit this card to 1 per deck. (This is only a suggestion, if you don't want it, then don't take it)

...Wouldn't that make it the winged dragon of Ra?

>> Oh Sh-- Sorry, I forgot to put (in multiples of x1000) in there sorry x.x

Name: Ghost Lily
Level: 3
Attribute/Type: Dark/Fairy/Effect
Attack: 0
Defense: 1500
Effect: When this face down card is attacked and flipped face up, negate the attack. While this card is in the graveyard, you can put it at the bottom of your deck. If you do, you gain 1000 lifepoints.

Yeah... this effect is pretty confusing.
"Flip: If an opponent's monster is attack, negate the attack. While this card is in the graveyard, you can place it at the bottom of your deck"
The gain 1000 life points is just plain out broken. Add a few morphing jars to it, you can get 3000 life points in a few turns even if it's limited to 1. So I don't think the gain 1000 life points should be there.

Yeah that one's right. Maybe I should have it get removed from play and change the gain to 800 instead.

>>That will work

Name: Abandoned Cemetery
Type: Field Spell
Effect: Monsters with 0 attack gain 1000 attack. When Abandoned Cemetary is destroyed, you can activate one "Reborn Cemetary" card from your hand, deck or graveyard.

Yeah... it's not bad, but take away the graveyard. It's pretty messed up otherwise.

Name: Reborn Cemetery
Type: Field Spell
Effect: Activate only with the effect of Abandoned Cemetary. Sacrifice Reborn Cemetary, destroy all monsters on the field with more then 500 attack. Target creature gains 300 attack for each card destroyed this way.


"Target creature" You didn't even select a monster so how are you going to 'target' it?

Target monster, once again, targets a monster

>> Read comment on first card

Name: Kira the Fox Monk
Level: 4
Attribute/Type: Earth/Warrior
Attack: 1800
Defence: 1200
Effect: This card gains 100 attack for every monster on your opponent's side of the field.

Lower it's attack points, for your opponent to attack this monster it's already a simple 1900.

Yeah but worst case scenario its a 2300 and that's IF your opponent has a full field. If I lowered it to 1600 then the best case scenario is that its 2100 attack, 100 attack greater then that gene warped wearwolf and only if the field is full.

>>Well I was actually thinking 1700 since most cards are 1800, and if your opponent had a monster on the field, it'd be 1800, so it's more reasonable.

Name: Enlightenment
Type: Spell/Continuous
Effect: Whenever a monster is placed on your opponent's side of the field that didn't come from his/her's hand, your opponent takes 300 damage. When Enlightenment is destroyed, you gan 1500 lifepoints. When your opponent orders an attack, you can destroy Enlightenment.

You I was fine with the effect until "When Enlightenment is destroyed, you gain 1500 life points." 1500? You have any idea how much I can do with that? 1500 is way to much, rather you shouldn't be gaining anything at all for it being destroyed.

I mainly made the destroy thing for its second ability. I could change it to "If Enlightenment is destroyed, you lose 400 life points. If it is destroyed by its own ability, you gain 1000 life points instead. Besides, they have way better healers then that. one, for example, would be guardian angle joan. with the new effect, though, its pretty much a dian keto. After all, the opponent isnt going to be getting that much on the field that isnt in their hand.

>>1500 is too much, especially because here we play by 4000 so 1500 is way too much. (I think it's 4000, according to the Advertisement I saw coming to the site) If it's 8000 I'll accept it.

[Apollo Shiyoke]

I completely revamped almost all of the cards you told me to.

[Jack Atlas]

Name: Reborn Cemetery
Type: Field Spell
Effect: Activate only with the effect of Abandoned Cemetary. Sacrifice Reborn Cemetary, destroy all monsters on the field with more then 500 attack. Target creature gains 300 attack for each card destroyed this way.

There's still no target on this.



>>Otherwise accepted.